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Colton - Commander for COR

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Last Picture Update: 

12/14/2014 

Last Info Update:

12/25/14


General Info:



Name: Colton
Nicknames: Cole
Gender: Male
Starting age: 5 years, 2 month
Current Age:
 7 years 3 months
Birth season: February 12th
Rank/Position: Commander
Species: 50% Husky, 25% German Shepard, 25% Grey Wolf
Items: Armor
Note/Extra: Cole is one of those canines that just doesn't show his expressions, and he rarely smiles. So if your character gets to see it, its a real treat.

Height: 28 inches (71.12 cm)
Weight: 82 lb (37.1946 kg)







Physical description:


Armor: Wears in battle and occasionally while checking borders, as well as training.
Consists of metal, leather, and various teeth.

Weapon of choice: Colton only really uses his teeth and claws, he doesn't use weapons.


Physical Traits that may be carried on:



Dominant: Dark dorsal stripe ; White paws ; White under fur

Recessive: German Shepard coloring ; Green eyes ; husky face markings ; Dark neck stripe

Carrier: (not seen in the parents) Grey pelt ; Amber eyes







Family:

Mother: ??? | 100% Husky | Status Unknown
Father: ??? | 50% German Shepard, 50% Grey Wolf | Status Unknown
Siblings: 
        Sister: ??? | 
50% Husky, 25% German Shepard, 25% Grey Wolf | Status unknown (open to someone playing her)

Open to family members.



CP balance: 7


Statistics:


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Vitality: (how well a character recovers/endurance)
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Personality:


Brave | Calm | Firm | Kind | Selfless | Focused | Protective | Noble | Conservative

Brave: 
Colton has always been brave, even as a pup. Always venturing out on his own into danger and getting himself in trouble. Or putting himself in front of others when in danger. And never scared of anything, or at least he doesnt show it. 
"Im going, whether you come or not."

Calm
Cole always seems to keep calm, even in the most scary or stressful situations, and if he isn't calm, he doesn't ever show it. He feels like its his job to be calm, even if he is scared or not calm on the inside. 
"Don't worry. We'll just have to change the plan a little. Stay calm, it's gonna be fine." 

 Conservative: 
Cole never really shows any bad personality traits, for he feels he needs to be in control of his feelings and he needs to help others more than himself.
"No im fine. Now get back to work."

Firm: 
Cole has always been firm, but more now that he has become Commander. He always sees that the leaders orders are followed out, as well as some of his own.
"I told you to take care of that. Please go do it now."


Kind:
 
Cole is actually very kind, considering how firm and conservative he is. Always trying to help others, and he DEFINITELY puts others before himself. 
"Why don't we go explore, and maybe stop and hunt. That always cheers me up."


Selfless: 
Cole has always been selfless, more so in his later years though. He used to let his siblings eat before him, making sure they got enough to eat. And Cole always puts his district before himself, always.
"You have it, im full from this morning."

Focused: 
Cole has been focused all his life, his mind always on the task before him. And when he doesn't have a task, he gets quite lost, but finds something to do. But occasionally he goes on walks by himself, thinking hings through thoroughly, but usually brings back prey or something for his district.
"No, we need to focus. We need to find them before the sun sets."

Protective: 
Cole has become very protective after loosing his girlfriend, so to say. He feels its his own duty to protect all his district. Especially the leader, medic, and pups. 
"You touch her, you answer to me."


Noble: 
Cole is quite noble, putting others needs in front of his, getting respect from most canines because of it and some of his other personalities, as well as his rank. And over all, just comes off noble. 
*fur whips in the wind majestically*







Backstory:


"Growing Up”

Colton was born to a very sick female, who died about a week or two after birth. His father died before he was born. So he and his sister were left to fend for themselves, inside the vault with all the other orphans. It was rumored his father was one of the first canines to go explore the outside world, and perished, but then again, they were just rumors. He and his sister always kept to themselves, never talking to the other pups, never talking to the canines that ran the vault. Cole and his sister never got enough food, only getting enough to fully feed one of them, they were very skinny. So one late evening, when everyone was sleeping, Cole went looking for food, venturing through the underground shelter. Finally he found a big chunk of meat, lying outside of an opening in the wall. He couldn't see in for it was too dark, but he could hear snoring. He bit into the meat clamping his jaw around the piece almost as big as him, and started dragging.

When he got back to his sister he set it down and nudged her, "Sis! Look what I found!" he said quietly. She rubbed her eyes and looked down to where Cole indicated. Her eyes opened wide and she jumped up, "Where did you find meat like this?! It’s HUGE!" Cole looked around, "I found it outside one of the tunnels back that way." he said sitting down. His sister's eyes faded and her ears lay back onto her head, "You...you stole?" she asked him taking a step back. Cole looked at the meat, "No...It was just lying there! No one was eating it!" he said confused. Suddenly there was a loud bark and two large dogs came up to them. They asked which one of them stole it, and why. Cole was just about to speak when his sister stepped forward, "I did it. And it was because me and my brother were hungry, we don’t get enough to eat!" she said looking up to the large dogs. The front dog growled and picked up Cole's sister. The other dog growled at Cole, and grabbed the meat back. Cole was shocked, he yelled at the two dogs, "Give it back! “But they didn't even flick their ears back to him. Cole ran forward with a growl and bit the one large dog in the hind leg and he saw his sister do the same.  The large dogs yelped and spun around with a large paw smashed into Cole’s head sending him flying against the tunnel walls.  He heard a blood curdling cry and a thud. He looked up to see his sister lying in a lump pile on the tunnel floor. “NO!”  He scrambled to his feet in panic to get to his sister's side. The two large dogs were now gone. His sister lay there barely breathing her head had a large gash and was bleeding out heavily before Colton could do anything his sister was gone, just like that.

After Cole lost his sister he decided he was going to get stronger.  Unlike most canines that would wallow in their loss and not eat and never talk to other canines, he decided to be strong for his sister.  So after that day, he trained hard, eating as much as he got, never leaving behind scraps. He slowly became one of the strongest pups his age, growing in size and muscle. He often wandered the tunnels, trying to find the dogs that killed his sister, but he had no luck. After he turned 1 he heard that a big group of dogs were going to the surface, and he quickly volunteered. Not wanting to let this opportunity go, after all he had never seen the surface, and never seen real sunlight before. His volunteer wasn't accepted, and they left a couple days after.



"Losing Her"

Colton waited anxiously for the first party to return.  However the never did.  He knew it was too good to be true.  He waited for days and watched many patrols go missing.  Until one day a group went up and actually made it back. He along with the others grew excited. They could finally get out of this hell whole vault. Within a few days they finally let the dogs from the vault.  He happily awaited the feel of the ground beneath his paws and the sunlight on his back, He had never seen nor felt any of this but he knew it would be amazing.  

After a few days more Paradise was built behind the large city’s crumbling walls. Colton didn't mind the place at first but it eventually grew tiresome and the rules became ridiculous. He heard of a rebellion building and was tempted to join into it.  Upon exploring inside the city’s vast walls and areas, he met a beautiful dog in a back alley nibbling on some prey. Ae he went through the alley, the scent of the dog wafted toward his nose, "Hello?" he said Fluffing u his fur being friendly as to not scare the dog. A very beautiful lab mix looked up walked out toward him, "No worries stranger, I won’t bite." she said in a calm tone. He nodded and laid his fur down, "Is there any possibility I could stay here for the night? I’m just passing through, and I haven't rested for a long time." he said actually quite tired. She nodded and gave him a small smile, "Sure you can. I’m Caelia." she said sitting down near a rabbit carcass. "I’m Colton." he said licking his lips, he hadn't eaten for two days, and he was getting hungrier every second. Caelia looked at him, "Would you like to share? I had lunch so I’m not that hungry." she said pushing the rabbit to Cole with her paw. Cole's eyes widened, "Really? Thank you very much!" he said taking a bite of the rabbit. And that...was the first time he met Caelia.

***

Just yonder, Colton was struggling to make his way through the dense concrete forest behind Caelia’s alley. Colton had severely hurt his back left leg in an attempted to cross some mangled barbed wire and mesh fencing.  A mutant bear suddenly appeared, having caught wind of the blood. One paw after the other the bear approached him, growling a deep throaty growl. Colton backed up, his injured leg slowing him.  It was a rare incident that anything was within the walls of the city.

Caelia suddenly appeared beside him, and nuzzled his muzzle. Cole looked at her surprised, "Caelia, go back inside, I can handle this!" he said softly into her ear. Caelia frowned, "No. I’m staying here to protect you! You're hurt already! Let me help you." she said, and suddenly she charged at the bear, jumping up and swiping at its muzzle. The bear roared and stood up on its front legs wiping some blood off with a huge paw. Caelia backed up back to where Cole was. Cole looked into her aqua blue eyes, "You go to the side, I’ll go to the back." he said starting to limp around the bear in a large circle. He then signaled Caelia to go to the side, and she charged at the bears side, latching her jaws onto the bears left shoulder. The bear roared in agony and went back to all four paws on the ground. Cole then jumped onto the back of the bear, ignoring his leg. He clamped his jaws onto the bear’s scruff, shaking his head side to side, and blood seeping into his mouth. The bear roared again and tried to shake them off, but Cole kept his jaw shut as tight as he could, but he saw that Caelia was flung off by the bear. Cole was instantly worried as he saw that the wind was knocked out of her and she was breathing heavy. She stood up and shook her head, wobbling a little then focusing on the bear. The bear eyed her closely, growling. The bear walked toward Caelia and she jumped up, ready to fight. She charged at the bear and latched her jaw on the bear’s throat, blood soaking her muzzle. The bear moaned and whipped his head around clamping onto Caelia's back and neck, picking her up and shaking her. The bear stumbled around and eventually fell down, gurgling up blood. Cole fell off the bear and stared blankly at Caelia. She.....she's gone? No! This can't be! He thought to himself. He ran to her side, not noticing the piercing pain in his back leg. He lied down beside her, "Caelia....please get up. You can't leave me now...I can't live without you! I...I love you! And I ...should have let you know. Caelia...please...please get up!! Wake up Caelia! Please.....I need you."

"Coming To Your Senses"

After the months that followed Caelia's passing, Cole became very unhealthy, eating very rarely, not sleeping, and staying in one spot for almost the whole day with no moving. One day he stood up and decided to go back inside Paradise’s inner walls where most the canines were. He walked for a long time his injuries still bothered him since they did not heal right.

He caught a scent of a mouse, and following it led him to a small hole in walls of a collapsed building. He dug at it with his paws, until he came to a large hole, he found five baby mice. He licked his lips and ate the tender mice not leaving a scrap behind. He figured he rest there and he sighed softly.  He set the last mouse down near his paws. Caelia, I know you're up there...and I know everyone says you’re in a better place, but are you? Are you happy? He thought to himself, still looking at the hole. Suddenly the clouds cleared and a ray of light landed on the ground next to him, taking that for her saying yes he stood up with his mouse, and headed onward almost there. Caelia. thank you. He was ready to move on, and find himself a new home, for this one brought back too much pain.  

Once he reached the main section of paradise he met a group of dogs that was going out and leaving paradise, he himself wanting to go, volunteered. And that’s how he met Angel, his leader.  He never realized how big the rebellion had gotten since he had stayed away from most of the drama. But with angels explanation he to felt that this was not freedom this was not his home. And with that he followed Angel and the others, fighting for his freedom and his life.








Relationships:



Bullet; PurpleBullet; Purple Family
Death Dead/Killed
Frail Missing/Captured
No Star Former Mentor/Apprentice
Star! Mentor/Apprentice
Heart Mate 
jsenn the beloved Oath

Bullet; RedBullet; RedBullet; Red Despises
Bullet; RedBullet; RedLoathes
Bullet; Red  Hate
Bullet; BlackBullet; BlackBullet; Black Unsure
Bullet; BlackBullet; Black Distrust/Discomfort/Fear
Bullet; Black Acquaintance
Bullet; OrangeBullet; OrangeBullet; Orange Dislike
Bullet; OrangeBullet; Orange Jealous of
Bullet; Orange Irritating/Annoying
Bullet; Purple Neutral
Bullet; Yellow Respect
Bullet; YellowBullet; Yellow Admire
Bullet; Blue Likes
Bullet; BlueBullet; Blue Friends
Bullet; Green Close Friends
Bullet; GreenBullet; Green BFF's
Bullet; Pink Attraction
Bullet; PinkBullet; Pink Crush
Bullet; PinkBullet; PinkBullet; Pink Prominent/Solitary Crush
Bullet; White Non-Romantic Love
Bullet; WhiteBullet; White Romantic Love
Bullet; WhiteBullet; WhiteBullet; White Can't Live Without

Sigma


N/A

Lambda


N/A

Delta

N/A

Mutants

N/A

Dogs of Paradise

N/A

Other


DeathCaelia former girlfriend
Bullet; PinkBullet; Pink/Bullet; Yellow "I miss you so much, and I know you'd want me to get over you and find myself a new mate...but its hard...theres no-one as wonderful as you were.....i'll never forget you...never."






Drawing records


Total CP: 7

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Activity Check:

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Other Drawings:
Angle's fire - COR - 7 CP

Other Writing:





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Dragotan's avatar
Hey Luna I'm working on some stuff for COR, could i ask when Colton's birthday is? Is the age here accurate?